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The Two Week Curse by Michael Chatfield
The Two Week Curse by Michael  Chatfield







The Two Week Curse by Michael Chatfield

Well, let me shatter that assumption right now. So maybe you'd think that, having problems in dialog and setting may be made up by plot. Contrast this to Aleron King's first couple LitRPG novels and it just feels like this book isn't trying. Second, the setting is illustrated in such a subpar way that often I couldn't picture where I should be standing as I took on the perspective of the characters. Characters exist simply to postulate what another character may have been thinking, which is typical in a fantasy, but it's done in such a generic way that it doesn't sound like the natural conversation or thought a third party would have had of a situation they were witnessing. So why? Well first, the dialog (if you wanna call it that) is so unbearably unrealistic that it distracts from the reading. It just doesn't stand up to avid reading. This book would have gotten at most a 1 star if I had read it in 8th grade. I am baffled by this having such a high rating.









The Two Week Curse by Michael  Chatfield